65 Limit
An attempt to write a story in 65 words, inspired from vivhyd's blog (changed the limit from 55 to 65!).
He was delighted to see a basket of eggs. He realized that his dad's indifference when he asked him for an egg was just to surprise him. He grabbed one and drank it in a gulp.
His inebriated father was getting a good sleep, as he had a long day ahead. He has been designated to throw the acid-filled eggs in tommorrow's political meeting.
He was delighted to see a basket of eggs. He realized that his dad's indifference when he asked him for an egg was just to surprise him. He grabbed one and drank it in a gulp.
His inebriated father was getting a good sleep, as he had a long day ahead. He has been designated to throw the acid-filled eggs in tommorrow's political meeting.

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McLaughlin tops, but second unsettled
Northwest Spokane voters and first-time candidate Nancy McLaughlin will have to wait a week or more to find out the other name on the general election ballot for the District 3 Council seat.
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OK my attention is arrested:0)
Standing on the bridge,cascaded in haze,engulfed in her own desolution there she was,the 1glorifying in her own melancholie,,twisted in maze.she wanted happiness she was yearning fr the sunshine.and she reached the forest,not in spring but in autumn,she wanted 2hold the stars,the redflowers,the dewdrops,but she ended up having the crusted leaves and parishing beleives:0)
how many wrds were these,i hat to chop half of the lines:0
Sebia, is that desolation (desolution) and perishing (parishing)?
Good effort, but whats with the melancholy?
arm. nice one da.. I think to tell a good story in short words is interesting. I knw u can write good stories but to do it this short is gr8.. nice one but a sad one thgh
whoaaaaaaaaa that was damn scary lol!
me cant finish anything even in 10words loll...I need atleast 65words to say hello :)
Keshi.
hehe..i love 2 jumble up my spellings and waisay bhi they shucks anyways:)
plus its always hard fr me 2 check wht i have blabbered even i get lost in my gibberish:(
On seeing your title,i was wondering about how come 55 limit changed to 65.
Nice story.
Was this story inspired by a recent bout of acidity?
u r more slow thn im...update naa baba:)
so tht i can comment..:)i like commenting here
Thanks guys for yor comments..Finch Scout and Lakshmi, welcome. Finch, nice of you to take your time and leave comments on a handful of my posts.
Sebzz, i ll try my best to keep up with ur pace.
Chrys man, yo look at things frma diff angle huh?
oopsssss,,im sorry:(( fr jinxing ur name,thts why i ws wondering tht u cms acrossdecent enough frm ur blog how can u get such a yucky id:(and thn i totally jinxed it,,shorry,,can u frgive my sin..or u gonna curse my soul till eternity:)
BTW wheres my link which u were abt 2 blogroll:((((
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